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October 21, 2007
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Panasonic
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DMC-LZ7
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10/3200 second
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F/8.0
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Sep 9, 2007, 12:21:37 PM
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Blue Rain by egzystencja Blue Rain by egzystencja
photo: me

Siedzę na parapecie okna,
I obserwuję ludzi tłum - smutno mi,
Już nadchodzi noc i na każdego z nich,
W domu czeka ktoś, a ja jestem sam...

Wtedy burza nadchodzi, wtedy pada deszcz,
Nagle świat się rozpadał, płynie moja krew,
Powiedz mi, jak długo jeszcze czekać mam,
Ale pospiesz się, bo za późno będzie już.

IRA
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:icon000-n-000:
I like it.

If critique is wished for a further version plz think about following:

- increasing of the contrast will sharpen the edges of the colour and the darkness.

- a little fading of all drops till the one in the middle will give a better focus to the main picture...

... just an idea... don't feel disturbed please of the idea. thanks.
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:icondantes88:
bardzo piekne :) krása :)
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:iconegzystencja:
Dziękuje. Witam koleżanke ze Slovaki! ;)
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:iconsteal-midnight:
Steal-Midnight Mar 3, 2008   Photographer
what is the translantion ?_?
lovely shot.. : )
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:iconegzystencja:
The translation is:
I'm siting on a windows sill
I'm looking on a people crowd - I feel sorrow
Night is coming and for everyone of them
somebody is waiting in home and I am alone

Then the storm is coming,then the rain is falling
Suddenly the world have shattered, my blood is runing
Tell me how long i will have to wait
But make it quick because it can be too late

P.S Sorry for my english but i have done my best
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:iconsteal-midnight:
Steal-Midnight Mar 7, 2008   Photographer
it simply too beautiful.. I love it.. really
too many thankss.. : )
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:iconthe-owieczka:
the-owieczka Nov 29, 2007   Traditional Artist
deszcz zawsze ma w sobie jakieś głębsze przesłanie...
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:iconegzystencja:
thank you very much! :*
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